190225 homework

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I think parents should help their children to set goals.

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>>OR: I think parents should guide  their children when setting their goals.  
If a child has a goal, parents should provide a proper environment.

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>>OR: If a child has a goal, parents should create an enriching setting for his or her development.

For example, if it\'s educational goal, they could send to an academy.

>>For example, if it\'s an educational goal, they could send the child to an academy.

If the goal is unable to achieve alone, they also have to help with that.

>>If the goal is impossible to be achieved on their own, they also have to help with that.

While achieving the goals, there may be the times that you want to give up.

>>While achieving the set goals, there may be times when the child would want to give up.

Whenever that happens, parents should encourage and motivate thier children.

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>>OR: Whenever that happens, parents should encourage and motivate their children to keep going.

Also when the child seems to be having a problem with his/her goal, they have to be concern with it and try to solve the problem.

>>Also, when the child seems to be having a problem with his/her goal, they have to be concerned with it and they should try to solve the problem.

They could also give advice on the child\'s goal.

>>They could also give pieces of advice which are relevant to the child\'s goal.

However, having no goal also can be a problem.

>>However, having no goal can also be a problem.

>>OR: However, having no goal, also, can be a problem.

I think parents should give the child a various experiences so that the child can think of his/her goal. 

>>I think parents should give the child various experiences so that the child can think of his/her goal. 
 I think parents\' help is very important for a child with a goal.

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>>I think it is very important for parents to help their children to achieve their goals.