190227 homework

2019-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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The homework was over 1000 letters, so I used the attached file.

강사 첨삭

Hi Yun Chae! I appreciate the effort. But unfortunately I can not open the file. * * I have placed here the answers for your reference. ^ ^  Thank you and hope to have classes with you again in the future if your schedule allows you! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


1. I had a terrible day at work and lost my umbrella too. ____I spoke to that nice guy who works in the coffee shop at last!

>>I had a terrible day at work and lost my umbrella too. At least, I spoke to that nice guy who works in the coffee shop at last!

2. Television turns people into lazy couch potatoes. ____, there are some educational programs on.

>>Television turns people into lazy couch potatoes. On the other hand, there are some educational programs on.

3. ____ , I would like to welcome you all to the conference today.

>>Firstly , I would like to welcome you all to the conference today.

4.  ____ the film was a little boring, we still had a nice evening out.

>>Though the film was a little boring, we still had a nice evening out.

5. I\'ve always known Caroline as a mean person. ____ , she lent me $10 yesterday without me having to ask twice!

>>I\'ve always known Caroline as a mean person. However , she lent me $10 yesterday without me having to ask twice!

6. I got up at 9 o\'clock yesterday and had a cold shower. ____, I had breakfast and left for work.

>>I got up at 9 o\'clock yesterday and had a cold shower. Then, I had breakfast and left for work.

7. My brother works in a large office ____ I work on my own at home.

>>My brother works in a large office whereas I work on my own at home.

8. Why do you think I don\'t want to go out tonight. ____ , I would be delighted to get out of the house.

>>Why do you think I don\'t want to go out tonight. Actually , I would be delighted to get out of the house.

9. You should go to university as it gives you a chance to meet so many new people. ____, it gives you the chance to get important qualifications and get a better job.

>>You should go to university as it gives you a chance to meet so many new people. Moreover, it gives you the chance to get important qualifications and get a better job.

10. I don\'t want to go to the football game. Football bores me and I don\'t want to pay $40 for a ticket.  ____ , look at the weather! All that rain!

>>I don\'t want to go to the football game. Football bores me and I don\'t want to pay $40 for a ticket.  Besides , look at the weather! All that rain!

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