190301 homework

2019-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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HOMEWORK: ~ WRITING TASK! How can you overcome boredom? I usually get bored when I am taking a school lesson and reading a book. It is very hard for me to overcome boredom. Sometimes, I become very bored when I’m taking a school lesson, especially, if the class is a class that I don’t like. Also, when I’m reading a book which is not funny or too hard, it makes me bored too. Whenever that happens I have to overcome boredom. First, I try not to sleep. When you are bored, you fall asleep. So, I drink cold water or go to the restroom and wash my hand with cold water to get rid of sleep. Second, I try to be interested. It gets bored unless I like it. So, I repeat that “This is not boring at all.” in my mind. If this doesn\'t work, either, I choose the way to sleep for a moment and wake up. I’m using these ways to overcome boredom, but I seem to use the last method most often.

강사 첨삭

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Keep it up!

~Teacher Eunice


I usually get bored when I am taking a school lesson and reading a book.

>>> correct!

It is very hard for me to overcome boredom.

>>> correct! 

Sometimes, I become very bored when I’m taking a school lesson, especially, if the class is a class that I don’t like.

>>> Sometimes, I become very bored when I’m taking a school lesson.

>>> Especially, when I don’t like the class.

Also, when I’m reading a book which is not funny or too hard, it makes me bored too.

>>> correct!

Whenever that happens I have to overcome boredom.

>>> Whenever that happens, I have to overcome boredom. 

First, I try not to sleep.

>>> correct!

When you are bored, you fall asleep. So, I drink cold water or go to the restroom and wash my hand with cold water to get rid of sleep.

>>> I easily fall asleep, so, I drink cold water or go to the restroom, and wash my hand with cold water to get rid of sleep.  

Second, I try to be interested.

>>> correct!

>>> Secondly, I stay motivated.

It gets bored unless I like it. So, I repeat that “This is not boring at all.” in my mind.

>>> It gets boring unless I like it, so I keep telling myself “This is not boring at all.”

If this doesn\'t work, either, I choose the way to sleep for a moment and wake up.
>>>
If this doesn\'t work either, I choose to sleep for a moment and wake up.

>>> If this doesn\'t work either, I then choose to take a nap.  

I’m using these ways to overcome boredom, but I seem to use the last method most often.

>>> correct!  

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