<1984>'s Prediction
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Hello sir,
I actually haven\'t read 1984 but I got curious because of you so I looked for a book summary on the internet. You are right, the book is quite interesting. It depicted the future which we are living now. You did a great job in stating your opinion about the topic in this composition. You are terrific sir! Have a nice day and I\'ll talk to you again on Friday!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
He who controls the past, controls the future, and he who controls the present, controls the past.
>>correct!
This is the doctrine of Communist Party in George Owell\'s novel <1984>. <1984> is the title of the novel.
>>This is the doctrine of the Communist Party in George Owell\'s novel 1984. 1984 is the title of the novel.
He wrote this novel in 1948 and predicted about the future society in the novel.
>>correct!
He indicated about some problems of future\'s society.
>>He indicated some problems of the future society.
The future\'s Nation dominated indivial through the controll of thought and the manipulation.
>>The future nation dominated individuals through mind control and manipulation.
He argued that the nation manipulaed the indivial\'s history.
>>He argued that the nation manipulated the individuals\' history.
His argument is surprisingly accurate.
>>correct!
The society which he predicted is very similar to now.
>>correct!
Everywhere\'s CCTV is recording their trace.
>>CCTV is everywhere recording everything.
Now is worse rather than the past.
>>The present is worse compared to the past.
This society in not utopia but distopia.
>>correct! (spelling: DYSTOPIA)
George Owell predicted the future\'s society.
>>George Owell predicted the society\'s future/future society.
The society is exactly distopia.
>>correct! (spelling:DYSTOPIA)
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