1day- homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Alice! Thank you for telling me about your hometown. I have heard so much about Busan. It must be really exciting to visit someday. Check below for the corrections I made on your work. Have a great day! ~T.Dee
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My hometown is Busan.
>>CORRECT!
Busan is the second city in Korea.
Busan is the second largest city in Korea.
It is famous for tourist sites.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: It is famous for some tourist destinations.
Because there is a wide of beach.
>>It is because there is a wide area of beaches.
Every year in summer season, many people come to Busan to play in the beach.
>>Every year during the summer season, many people come to Busan to play in the beach.
>>Every summer, many people come to Busan to have fun in the beach.
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