1st day, Class Material (6/21)
학생이 쓴 원문
1st day warming up. plz question to me as follows.
-What did you do this morning?
-How did you get here today?
-Tell me about your self.
-Why did you choose your major? What is your goal?
-How has your college experience prepared you for your career?
-How do you handle stress and pressure?
-Do you want to work alone or team?
-Do you think Engilsh is important? Why?
강사 첨삭
Hey there! Happy Wednesday! I really appreciate your effort in doing your homework. You did it so perfectly! I\'m still looking forward reading more compositions from you.Kindly review some of the corrections that I have made for you. Have a wonderful evening!
T. Kelly ^__^
Here are my corrections for you:
1st day warming up. plz question to me as follows.
>> First day warm up, please ask me these following questions:-What did you do this morning?
>> Correct-How did you get here today?
>> Correct-Tell me about yourself.
>> Correct
>>OR: Tell me something about yourself.-Why did you choose your major?
>> Correct
What is your goal?
>> Correct-How has your college experience prepared you for your career?
>> How did your college experience prepared you for your career?-How do you handle stress and pressure?
>> Correct-Do you want to work alone or team?
>> Do you want to work alone or in a team?
-Do you think Engilsh is important? Why?
>> Do you think English is important? Why?
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