1st day, Class Material (6/21)

2012-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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1st day warming up. plz question to me as follows. -What did you do this morning? -How did you get here today? -Tell me about your self. -Why did you choose your major? What is your goal? -How has your college experience prepared you for your career? -How do you handle stress and pressure? -Do you want to work alone or team? -Do you think Engilsh is important? Why?

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Hey there! Happy Wednesday! I really appreciate your effort in doing your homework. You did it so perfectly! I\'m still looking forward reading more compositions from you.Kindly review some of the corrections that I have made for you. Have a wonderful evening! T. Kelly ^__^ Here are my corrections for you: 1st day warming up. plz question to me as follows. >> First day warm up, please ask me these following questions:-What did you do this morning? >> Correct-How did you get here today? >> Correct-Tell me about yourself. >> Correct >>OR: Tell me something about yourself.-Why did you choose your major? >> Correct What is your goal? >> Correct-How has your college experience prepared you for your career? >> How did your college experience prepared you for your career?-How do you handle stress and pressure? >> Correct-Do you want to work alone or team? >> Do you want to work alone or in a team? -Do you think Engilsh is important? Why? >> Do you think English is important? Why?

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