1st. homework
학생이 쓴 원문
“I like to walk around my place with my wife, like a park of around my house. because we usally talking about my family\'s issues, so I think that is more positve effect for my family.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ho!
Good job explaining why you like walking with your wife! You clearly connected the activity to your family’s well-being. Next time, you could add a small detail about what you talk about or how it makes you feel to make your writing even more interesting. Keep it up!
~Teacher Polly
>>I like to walk around my neighborhood with my wife, like in a park near our house, because we usually talk about my family\'s issues.
>>I think that has a positive effect on my family.
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