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Ihave many times experience that intruduce myself to others. but eveytime, i felt shy. this time also i introduce myself althougt i feel shy. My english name is [이름]. I have been studing English over 15years but still study same things. when i was young, i really didn't want to study, but after I work at hotel as receptionist, I realized the important of English. Now, I enjoy English studing little by little although still difficult. after a few years, I want to live other country while work with foreinger. during last 1 yeay tha i lived in Canada, I improved my listening skill. but I usually listened freind's story, sadly, I still embarassed when i tell to somebody. Good thing, I know my weekness that I really really need to memorize vocabulary. Bad thing, I don't know how can i memorize effectly!! Maybe, I MUST try. No expedient. I expect to improve English skill with Power English. Thanks.

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition! Learning a language is a long and continuous process, so never give up on it. Don\'t be discouraged when you feel like your progress is slow. I\'m happy that you are aware of your weakness and that you\'re willing to work on it. Let\'s work hard together for your improvement. We can do it! Take care and have a nice day! T. JanE ^^ Ihave many times experience that intruduce myself to others.>> I have introduced myself several times to others.  but eveytime, i felt shy.>> However, everytime I do it, I still feel shy.  this time also i introduce myself althougt i feel shy.>> This time as I introduce myself, I also feel shy.  My English name is [이름].>> Correct I have been studing English over 15years but still study same things.>> I have been studying English for more than 15 years, but I\'m still studying the same things.  when i was young, i really didn\'t want to study, but after I work at hotel as receptionist, I realized the important of English.>> When i was young, I really didn\'t want to study; but now that I\'m working as a receptionist in a hotel, I realized the importance of English.  Now, I enjoy English studing little by little although still difficult.>> Now, although it\'s difficult, I enjoy studying English little by little.  after a few years, I want to live other country while work with foreinger.>> After a few years, I want to live in another country while working wth foreigners.  during last 1 yeay tha i lived in Canada, I improved my listening skill.>> I lived in Canada for a year, and my listening skill has improved.  but I usually listened freind\'s story, sadly, I still embarassed when i tell to somebody.>> I usually listen to my friend\'s stories, sadly though, I still feel embarrassed when I share them with others.  Good thing, I know my weekness that I really really need to memorize vocabulary. >> It\'s a good thing that I know my weakness and that is I need to memorize vocabularies. Bad thing, I don\'t know how can i memorize effectly!!>> The bad thing is, I don\'t know how to memorize effectively.  Maybe, I MUST try. >> Correct No expedient.>> It is expedient.  I expect to improve English skill with Power English.>> I am expecting to improve my English skills with the help of Power English.  Thanks. >> Correct