1st homework

Hi Elaine!

Thank you for taking the time to do your homework.

Your composition is very detailed.

I really appreciate it.

Please take note of the corrections.

Let\'s make sure that we always follow the correct rules and patterns.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

First expection is that i well speak English.

>> My first expectation is that I would be able to speak English well.

they\'re perfect sentences, express all of the thing in English.

>> I will make perfect sentences and express myself completely in English.
Second, I will study hard for go to the English speaking country and I\'m sure i\'ll go.

>> My second expectation is that I would be able to go to an English-speaking country to study hard.

From this year I do voluntary work every sunday at orphanage for teachinig math to elementary school student.

>> This year, I have started to do voluntary work in an orphanage by teaching Math to elementary school students every Sunday.

After when I come back Korea I hope to teach English and my knowledge to there children.

>> When I come back to Korea after studying abroad, I hope to teach English and impart my knowledge to the children in my country.