1st homework

2019-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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Q. What are some important qualities of a good supervisor(boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important They should know how they can complain well about the worker\'s behaviors. As far as I\'ve experienced, Most of the bosses don\'t care about the feeling of workers. of course, they have to correct some wrong behavior or attitude of their workers. but they usually don\'t do that in a gentle way. In many cases, they seem to just want to hurt the feeling of workers. I understand that the wrong behaviors or the low achievement could make them upset. but they shouldn\'t put their anger into the words. and they should be more diligent than other staffs. If you noticed your boss doesn\'t work hard, that makes me feel annoying. Because despite he or she didn\'t work hard, they would certainly get more money than you. also, I had experienced that kind of things. whenever I felt that, I couldn\'t stop thinking of quitting a job.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]~! ^^ Thanks  for diligently doing your homework! ^^

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

They should know how they can complain well about the worker\'s behaviors.

>>> They should know well how they can handle the worker\'s behaviors .

As far as I\'ve experienced, most of the bosses don\'t care about the feeling of workers.

>>> CORRECT

Of course, they have to correct some wrong behavior or attitude of their workers.

>>> CORRECT

But they usually don\'t do that in a gentle way.

>>> CORRECT

In many cases, they seem to just want to hurt the feeling of workers.

>>> CORRECT

I understand that the wrong behaviors or the low achievement could make them upset but they shouldn\'t put their anger into the words.
>>> CORRECT
They should be more diligent than other staffs.

>>> CORRECT

If you noticed your boss doesn\'t work hard, that makes me feel annoying because despite he or she didn\'t work hard, they would certainly get more money than you.

>>> CORRECT

Also, I had experienced that kind of things. whenever I felt that, I couldn\'t stop thinking of quitting a job.

>>>Also, I had experienced those things. whenever I felt that, I couldn\'t stop thinking of quitting a job.

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