1st homework
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강사 첨삭
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
They should know how they can complain well about the worker\'s behaviors.
>>> They should know well how they can handle the worker\'s behaviors .
As far as I\'ve experienced, most of the bosses don\'t care about the feeling of workers.
>>> CORRECT
Of course, they have to correct some wrong behavior or attitude of their workers.
>>> CORRECT
But they usually don\'t do that in a gentle way.
>>> CORRECT
In many cases, they seem to just want to hurt the feeling of workers.
>>> CORRECT
I understand that the wrong behaviors or the low achievement could make them upset but they shouldn\'t put their anger into the words.
>>> CORRECT
They should be more diligent than other staffs.
>>> CORRECT
If you noticed your boss doesn\'t work hard, that makes me feel annoying because despite he or she didn\'t work hard, they would certainly get more money than you.
>>> CORRECT
Also, I had experienced that kind of things. whenever I felt that, I couldn\'t stop thinking of quitting a job.
>>>Also, I had experienced those things. whenever I felt that, I couldn\'t stop thinking of quitting a job.
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