1st homework

2020-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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1. I didn\'t do the shopping and now we\'re out of milk. I like drinking milk. When I eat bread, I must drink milk. And I love vanilalatte. We have coffee machine in the office. As soon as I get on the office, I make a vanilalatte. So I need milk anytimes. But, my coworker didn\'t do the shopping. So, we were out of milk today morning. Then, I went to the convenience store to buying milk. 3. I love doing my homework. My teacher sets me really fun tasks. Teacher. I\'m sorry to didn\'t do my homework until now. It is first time to supply homework. I try to reduce time to drinking. And I\'m going to make good shape body and get the improve English skill. So, from now on I will do homework everyday. Please check whether my expression is good or not and feed back to me. 4. I find it easy to make new friends. Nowdays, I feel lonely. Many freinds got married or are preparing their wedding. Although I want to meet them, they don\'t give me the time

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]^^

I was really surprised that I received a message from you!

Yes, this is a good start. Don\'t feel lonely, I am here, your boyfriend is there and your family.

Your friends will soon have time to meet you. For now, focus on your work, family, and English study - hahaha.

Talk to you later. ^^


1. I didn\'t do the shopping and now we\'re out of milk.
>>I didn\'t go grocery shopping, so now we ran out of milk.
I like drinking milk.
>>CORRECT!
When I eat bread, I must drink milk.
>>CORRECT!
And I love vanilalatte.
>>And I love Vanilla Latte.
We have coffee machine in the office.
>>We have a coffee machine in our office.
As soon as I get on the office, I make a vanilalatte.
>>As soon as I arrive at the office, I make a vanilla latte.
So I need milk anytimes.
>>So I always need milk.
But, my coworker didn\'t do the shopping.
>>But, my coworker didn\'t go grocery shopping.
So, we were out of milk today morning.
>>So we ran out of milk this morning.
Then, I went to the convenience store to buying milk.
>>And I went to the convenience store to buy milk.
3. I love doing my homework.
>>CORRECT!
My teacher sets me really fun tasks.
>>My teacher gives me a really interesting tasks.
Teacher. I\'m sorry to didn\'t do my homework until now.
>>I\'m sorry I didn\'t do my homework until now.
It is first time to supply homework.
>>It is my first time to do my homework.
I try to reduce time to drinking.
>>I\'ll try to cut down on alcohol.
And I\'m going to make good shape body and get the improve English skill.
>>And I will be in good shape and improve my English.
So, from now on I will do homework everyday.
>>So from now on, I will do my homework every day.
Please check whether my expression is good or not and feed back to me.
>>Please check my expressions if it is good or not and give me a feedback.
4. I find it easy to make new friends.
>>CORRECT!
Nowdays, I feel lonely.
>>These days I feel lonely.
Many freinds got married or are preparing their wedding.
>>Many friends are either married or preparing to get married.
 Although I want to meet them, they don\'t give me the time
>>Although I want to meet them, but they don\'t have time.

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