2.04 homework
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What is something you did that you think you can not?
Something I did that I think I can not is to clip the newspaper. I always lasted only a few days. I used to feel boring easily even though this need less time. However, I resolved to do regularly every morning. Still, I am keeping this routine. Another thing is to join in gathiering. these days, I participate in studying group for job every saturday. We are 10 members including me and they have different kinds of major and hope different duties each other: marketing, design, MD, sales and IT field. At frist I hesitated to join in there because I couldn\'t make sure whether i can do well and I was likely to feel daunted. But, the time which I met them was useful and that time was enough to get me in high spirits. I could rather get informations I didn\'t know and learn through their communication skills or upstanding behaviors.
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Hi [이름]! Thanks for this homework. I really appreciate the effort and the time you put into it! ^ ^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts here too. I agree with you, sometimes we have a lot of hesitations but the end result turns out to be good any way! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
I always lasted only a few days.
>>I only lasted for a few days.
I used to feel boring easily even though this need less time.
>>I easily got bored doing it although it only needed little time.
However, I resolved to do regularly every morning.
>>However, I was able to do it regularly in the morning.
Still, I am keeping this routine.
>>CORRECT
Another thing is to join in gathiering.
>>Another thing is to join in gatherings.
these days, I participate in studying group for job every saturday.
>>These days, I participate in study groups for job seekers every Saturday. (I hope this is what you mean.)
We are 10 members including me and they have different kinds of major and hope different duties each other: marketing, design, MD, sales and IT field.
>>We are 10 members including me and we have different kinds of major and with different duties like marketing, design, MD, sales and IT field.
At frist I hesitated to join in there because I couldn\'t make sure whether i can do well and I was likely to feel daunted.
>>At first, I was hesitant to join because I wasn\'t sure whether I can do well and I was likely to feel daunted.
But, the time which I met them was useful and that time was enough to get me in high spirits.
>>CORRECT
I could rather get informations I didn\'t know and learn through their communication skills or upstanding behaviors.
>>I was able to get information I didn\'t know and learned through their communication skills and outstanding behaviors.
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