2/1 homework

2018-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

model 1. I watched YOUTUBE video that model ate some of lettuces and eggs 2. the model has long legs, long arms and small face! she looks like doll role model 1. he is Sally's role model 2. The president talks that all student must have own role model.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]! ^-^

A happy Tuesday to you!

How are you doing today? I hope you\'re alright.

Thank you for accomplishing your homework.

Your sentences are good, however, I\'ve made some modifications.

See you later in class!^^

_T. Mayleen :)

model
1. I watched YOUTUBE video that model ate some of lettuces and eggs

>>> I watched a YouTube video where a model ate some lettuce and eggs.
2. the model has long legs, long arms and small face! she looks like doll

>>> The model has long legs, long arms, and a small face. She looks like a doll!

role model
1. he is Sally\'s role model

>>> Correct! [He is Sally\'s role model.]

CAPITALIZATION AND PUNCTUATION.
2. The president talks that all student must have own role model.

>>> The president said that all students must have a role model.

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