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Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
You gave an awesome thought about the topic. Small things mean a lot. It doesn\'t have to be big, but doing small things together and consistently can contribute a lot with altering climate change. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
Yes, I think we can do it very well.
>>Yes, I think we can contribute with altering climate change.
The climate change is caused by not only carbon dioxide but various chemicals.
>>Correct
The chemicals come from our living life.
>>The chemicals come from human activities.
We can reduce plastic waste and use my own cup in cafe.
>>One way to contribute in reducing plastic wastes is by using our own cups in cafes.
I heard a news that avocado requires a lot of water to grow and many trees are burning to provide arable land.
>>I heard a news that avocado requires a lot of water to grow and many trees are being burned to provide arable land.
So, some people speak they don\'t want to eat avocado anymore to save the earth.
>>So, some people say that they wouldn\'t want to eat avocadoes anymore to save the earth.
I think it is very difficult to turn back to very clean past.
>>I think it is very difficult to turn back time.
If we want to do it, we must live like a primitive man.
>>Correct
However, we can decelerate the climate changing speed.
>>Correct
We should do it to survive in the earth.
>>Correct or
>>We should do it to survive and save Earth as well.
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