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2019-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[What can an ordinary person do to help in altering climate change?] Yes, I think we can do it very well. The climate change is caused by not only carbon dioxide but various chemicals. The chemicals come from our living life. We can reduce plastic waste and use my own cup in cafe. I heard a news that avocado requires a lot of water to grow and many trees are burning to provide arable land. So, some people speak they don't want to eat avocado anymore to save the earth. I think it is very difficult to turn back to very clean past. If we want to do it, we must live like a primitive man. However, we can decelerate the climate changing speed. We should do it to survive in the earth.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^

You gave an awesome thought about the topic. Small things mean a lot. It doesn\'t have to be big, but doing small things together and consistently can contribute a lot with altering climate change. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


Yes, I think we can do it very well.

>>Yes, I think we can contribute with altering climate change.
The climate change is caused by not only carbon dioxide but various chemicals.

>>Correct
The chemicals come from our living life.

>>The chemicals come from human activities.
We can reduce plastic waste and use my own cup in cafe.

>>One way to contribute in reducing plastic wastes is by using our own cups in cafes. 
I heard a news that avocado requires a lot of water to grow and many trees are burning to provide arable land.

>>I heard a news that avocado requires a lot of water to grow and many trees are being burned to provide arable land. 
So, some people speak they don\'t want to eat avocado anymore to save the earth.

>>So, some people say that they wouldn\'t want to eat avocadoes anymore to save the earth. 
I think it is very difficult to turn back to very clean past.

>>I think it is very difficult to turn back time. 
If we want to do it, we must live like a primitive man.

>>Correct
However, we can decelerate the climate changing speed.

>>Correct
We should do it to survive in the earth.

>>Correct or

>>We should do it to survive and save Earth as well.

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