2.10 Homework

2015-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good afternoon! Have you a great lunch? What did you eat for lunch? I had a lunch roughly in our cafeteria. If you were a color, what would you be? why? Does a color mean people of color? If that is correct, I like white person individually. I am the oriental race.I feel envy the people with a porcelain skin like white person. I think that the wemen who have porcelain skin are more beautiful than other colored people. My class will finish the day after tomorrow. so I have to sign up again. but I would like to have a vacation for a few weeks. It may be next early month that I can see you again. How do you think about that, and is it possible? Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi there Mr. [이름]! I hope that you had a delicious lunch. In my case, I usually have lunch at home. Anyway, thanks for your homework. Have a great afternoon. ~t. Kelly^^ Hi there! Good afternoon! >> Correct. Have you a great lunch? >> Did you have a great lunch? What did you eat for lunch? >> Correct. I had a lunch roughly in our cafeteria.>> I had a lunch in our cafeteria.If you were a color, what would you be? why?Does a color mean people of color? >> Does it mean the complexion of people? If that is correct, I like white person individually. >> If that is correct, I like white people. I am the oriental race. >> I belong to the oriental race. I feel envy the people with a porcelain skin like white person. >> I envy people with porcelain skin like white people. I think that the wemen who have porcelain skin are more beautiful than other colored people. >> I think that the women who have porcelain skin are more beautiful than other races. Thank you! >> Correct.

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