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1. We\'d like to ask if you can help us install it on the site without our business trip. The electrical installation of Y-TECH equipment is our scope, and we will pay for it if you take someone to work there.
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Hello [이름]!^^
I appreciate your effort in sending this e-mail to your partner in Poland.You just need to compose your grammar properly so that they can understand you better.
We\'d like to ask if you can help us install it on the site without our business trip.
>>> We\'d like to ask if you can help us install it on the site without our business trip.
The electrical installation of Y-TECH equipment is our scope, and we will pay for it if you take someone to work there.
>>> We\'d like to ask if you can help us install it on the site without our business trip.
The electrical installation of Y-TECH equipment is our scope, and we will pay for it if you take someone to work there.
>>>The electrical installation of the Y-TECH equipment is our area of expertise, and we will pay for it if you can find someone to work there.
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