2-10th Homework

2016-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

This question is what the best idea that will most likely come true is. Have I ever thought about it or have I ever got it? I don't know. Yesterday, my wife said to me, "Could you attend the making ship contest at a festival in July?" In first, I could not easily say the positive answer since it was hard to make alone. But I can think about the type of making ship. I think it is also an idea that will come true. Finally, I find the person who will attend the contest. The ship's main purpose is able to ship one person. If I think about another idea that will come true, it was very old thing. When I was younger, nine or ten years old, I want to make the machine that fly using the gravity. Yeah, it is not most likely coming true. But someday anyone will make it, I wish. Until now, I don't know whether I exactly understood the question or not. But the idea is very good to everybody to dream of theirs. If you don't have any idea, it is very terrible to you. Think is always good.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! ^^ Thank you for answering the question in your homework even if you\'re not exactly sure if you understood it or not. I\'d like to commend you for trying and doing your best to share your opinions. I don\'t know if you\'ve ever heard of the expression: \"you are what you think\". It means, your thoughts are very powerful and they exactly define who you are. For example if you say, \"I will never be rich\", it would most likely come true because that\'s what you tell yourself and that\'s how you see yourself. A famous man by the name of Mahatma Gandhi once said this words: \"Your beliefs become your thoughts. Your thoughts become your words. Your words become your actions. Your actions become your habits. Your habits become your values. Your values become your destiny.\" If you look at it closely, the end result would totally depend on your belief and your thoughts. Most people fail not because they don\'t have the ability to succeed but because they believe that they can\'t make it. That\'s how powerful thoughts are. Anyhow, I hope I was able to enlighten you. Have a wonderful day. See you again on Thursday. ~Teacher C[이름] (^_^) This question is what the best idea that will most likely come true is. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: This question is all about how I view myself and how likely it would come true. Have I ever thought about it or have I ever got it? >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Have I ever thought about it or have I ever considered it? I don\'t know. >> CORRECT! OR >> I\'m not sure if I have an answer. Yesterday, my wife said to me, \"Could you attend the making ship contest at a festival in July?\" >> Yesterday, my wife said to me, \"could you attend the contest on making a ship for the festival in July?\" In first, I could not easily say the positive answer since it was hard to make alone. >> At first, I could not easily give a positive answer since it was hard to make one alone. But I can think about the type of making ship. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: But I can think about the model of a ship. I think it is also an idea that will come true. >> CORRECT! OR >> I think this is an idea that will come true. Finally, I find the person who will attend the contest. >> Finally, I found the person who will attend the contest. The ship\'s main purpose is able to ship one person. >> The ship\'s main purpose is to be able to ship one person. If I think about another idea that will come true, it was very old thing. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: I have also thought of other ideas that could come true in the past. When I was younger, nine or ten years old, I want to make the machine that fly using the gravity. >> When I was younger, about nine or ten years old, I wanted to make a machine that will fly using the gravity. Yeah, it is not most likely coming true. >> CORRECT! OR >> I think theres a slim chance that  it will come true. But someday anyone will make it, I wish. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: But someday, I wish that someone will make it. Until now, I don\'t know whether I exactly understood the question or not. >> CORRECT! OR >> Up to this point, I\'m not sure if I understood the question or not. But the idea is very good to everybody to dream of theirs. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: But the idea is very good to everybody who goes after their dreams. If you don\'t have any idea, it is very terrible to you. >> CORRECT! OR >> Not having an idea of your own if very terrible. Think is always good. >> Thinking is always good.

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