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2015-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi Kelly! Good morning! I was really interested in our class today. Thank you! What a common characteristics do all wemen share? I think that all wemen share common characteristics like silent,inactive,emo and careful. On the other hand, the men have common chracteristtics that are more active and spontaneous. I think that both of these have some strength and weakness. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mr. [이름]!
I\'m glad that you were interested in our class today. I hope that you will keep that interest everyday. Anyway, thank you for your homework. Keep safe always.

~Kelly^^
Hi Kelly! Good morning! I was really interested in our class today. Thank you!
>> Correct.
What a common characteristics do all wemen share?
>> What common characteristics do all women share?
I think that all wemen share common characteristics like silent,inactive,emo and careful.
>> I think that all women share common characteristics like being silent, inactive, emotional and careful.
On the other hand, the men have common chracteristtics that are more active and spontaneous.
>> On the other hand, men have common characteristics too. They are more active and spontaneous.

I think that both of these have some strength and weakness.

>> I think that both of them have some strengths and weaknesses.
Thank you!

>> Correct.

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