2/11 homework

2016-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Creative Writing 2016 is year of the Fire Monkey/Red Monkey. What do you expect to accomplish this year? This year, I think I will be busy and active because I have many plans. But it is not important to me accomplish something, it is important to me keep going and don't give up.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!^_^   I like your way of thinking, [이름]. It is important to keep going, pay forward, and no giving up despite challenges or circumstances you might face in the future. But I think having a goal will help you focus more. It\'s like shooting an arrow from a bow without a definite target. Thank you for accomplishing your homework. See you in class.   ~T. Mayleen~   This year, I think I will be busy and active because I have many plans. >>Correct! OR: I wiwll be busy and active this year because I have so many plans.But it is not important to me accomplish something, >>It is not important for me to accomplish somethingit is important to me keep going and don\'t give up. >>It is important to keep going and don\'t ever give up.

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