2/11 homework

2019-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

[Do you feel different because of weather? How do different types of weather affect your emotions?] Yes, I do. On a sunny day, somehow I am exciting. I want to stop working and go out, and sometimes I feel something positive emotion. On a gloomy day, I get depress. But, sometimes it makes me relaxed and calm with rain. So, at that time, it is good chance to work quietly or make a plan about my life. Fortunately, my desk is in front of the big window. Always I can see outside with Jeju ocean and check the weather. My feeling is changing with weather, but I take effort to think positively. Although it is not relate to weather, I really like to see ships\' light at night in my office. I feel that it console me.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Wonderful day! I hope you are enjoying your day so far. ^ ^ Thank you for accomplishing your homework. Your consistency with doing your homework is remarkable! Keep it up! ^ ^

Thanks for your thoughts on this one! ^ ^ I have to agree with you too. My mood changes depending on the weather. Funny thing is that I have a \"love and hate\" relationship with the rain. I love the rain especially when I\'m in the house just looking out the window and probably having some sip of coffee. But, I hate it if I need to go outside for some reasons and it soaks me wet! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


Yes, I do.

>>Correct
On a sunny day, somehow I am exciting.

>>On a sunny day, somehow I feel excited. 
I want to stop working and go out, and sometimes I feel something positive emotion.

>>I want to stop working and go out, and sometimes I feel some positive emotion or vibe.
On a gloomy day, I get depress.

>>On a gloomy day, I get depressed.
But, sometimes it makes me relaxed and calm with rain.

>>But, sometimes the rain makes me feel relaxed and calm. 
So, at that time, it is good chance to work quietly or make a plan about my life.

>>So, when it\'s raining, I feel like it\'s a good chance to work quietly and plan about my life.
Fortunately, my desk is in front of the big window.

>>Fortunately, my desk is in front of a big window.
Always I can see outside with Jeju ocean and check the weather.

>>I can always look at the ocean and can check the weather.
My feeling is changing with weather, but I take effort to think positively.

>>My feeling changes depending on the weather, but I put effort to think positively.
Although it is not relate to weather, I really like to see ships\' light at night in my office.

>>Although it is not related to weather, I really like to see some ships\' light at night in my office. 
I feel that it console me.

>>It consoles me. 

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