2-11th Homework

Some people say the crime is related with the environment, but others say it isn't. I don't know that the environment have the intensive relationship with the crime. On a second thought, It may be the intensive relationship. However, from the ancient the environment for living or educating was very important. In the ancient China, there was a very famous and great scholar, we called him as MengJa. But I don' say about him, I want to say to you his mother. His mother is very famous until now. It's because she considered the environments at that time. She moved three times for her son's education. Originally, they lived around some tombs. Her son pretended to cry while sitting up and down everyday. She thought this place was not proper to educate his son. She moved the other place that was a market place. Also, the son pretended to sell something and to slaughter everyday. The mother decided to move the place that was around the school. The son studied all day, he became a great scholar.

Hi, [이름]! ^^ Thank you very much for promptly doing your homework. I appreciate your effort a lot. Violent behaviors have always been part of human existence and researches as well as the government have continuously looked into its origin and its causes. In my opinion the environment has a connection with the occurrence of crime. The physical features of the environment affect the perceptions of a person who is about to commit a crime. Criminals who are about to perform a crime usually look at how easy would they be able to enter an area. They also consider the chances of being seen and what should they do when it happens. In addition to that, they also look into the possibility of what other people in the area would do to them once they get caught. If you\'re going to notice, all of these are part of the environment. I think the reason why more crimes happen in urban and suburban areas is because the environment is often busy and the people in it don\'t really care that much. Anyhow, that\'s just my opinion regarding this matter. I hope you\'re having a great day. See you again tomorrow. ^^ ~Teacher C[이름] :) Some people say the crime is related with the environment, but others say it isn\'t. >>Some people say a crime is related with the environment, but others say it isn\'t. I don\'t know that the environment have the intensive relationship with the crime. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: I didn\'t know that the environment has an intensive relationship with crimes. On a second thought, It may be the intensive relationship. >> On a second thought, It may be an intensive relationship. However, from the ancient the environment for living or educating was very important. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: However, from the ancient times, the environment has a big role in our day-to-day lives and in education. In the ancient China, there was a very famous and great scholar, we called him as MengJa. >> In the ancient China, there was a very famous and great scholar and we called him MengJa. But I don\' say about him, I want to say to you his mother. >> But I won\'t talk about him. I want to tell you about his mother instead. His mother is very famous until now. >> CORRECT! OR >> Up until now, his mother is still very famous. It\'s because she considered the environments at that time. >> It\'s because she considered the environment at that time. She moved three times for her son\'s education. >> CORRECT! OR >> She moved from one place to another thrice because of her son\'s education. Originally, they lived around some tombs. >> CORRECT! OR >> They originally lived around some tombs. Her son pretended to cry while sitting up and down everyday. >> CORRECT! She thought this place was not proper to educate his son. >> She thought this place was not a proper place to educate his son. She moved the other place that was a market place. >> She then moved to the market place. Also, the son pretended to sell something and to slaughter everyday. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: On the other hand, the son pretended to sell something while slaughtering everyday. The mother decided to move the place that was around the school. >> The mother decided to move to a place that was around a school. The son studied all day, he became a great scholar. >> The son studied all day and he became a great scholar.