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I visited New York two months ago. Anne isn't here at the moment.She went to London. In your life,how many different contries do you go? They opened the new shopping centre last week. How many page will you so far this week? Today,my friend visited at my home. His name is Ji heug Song. He is fat but cute. He is good at making robot. He wants to become a robot scientist. He is my best friend.

A great Wednesday to you Tom! Wow! I admire you for wrtiting two essays today. ^^ Wonderful! You did a very good job! Most of your sentences are correct! You deserve a round of applause!  Yipee! Do you like robots? Why? You can answer these questions in class. If you have any questions about the corrections, feel free to ask it in class. See you! Have a fun day! Teacher Nina   1. I visited New York two months ago. >> Correct >> OR: I went to New York two months ago. 2. Anne isn\'t here at the moment. She went to London. >> Anne isn\'t here at the moment. She\'s went to London. 3. In your life,how many different contries do you go? >> In your life, how many different countries have you visited? 4. They opened the new shopping centre last week. >> Correct! >> OR: They opened the new shopping center last week. 5. How many page will you so far this week? >> How many pages have you read so far this week? Today,my friend visited at my home. >> Today, my friend visited me at home.>> OR: My friend went to my house today.His name is Ji heug Song. >> Correct >> OR: He is Ji heug Song.He is fat but cute. >> Correct >> OR: He is fat and cute. He is good at making robot. >> Correct >> OR: He is good at making robots. He wants to become a robot scientist. >> Did you mean: He wants to become a scientist of robots. >> OR: He wants to become a Mechatronic Engineer. ( Robot Scientist is a laboratory robot. )He is my best friend. >> Correct