2.12 Homework

2015-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! I enjoyed the last class of this term today. Let's start our class in the next term more interesting after around one week rest. How would the world be different if all the money in the world was shared out equally among all people? If all the money in the world was shared out equally among all people, it could be cause a huge confusion. Look at this situation of Europeon Union's currency problems these day. Every each countries have their own economic levels. So I think that each countries use their own money. Thank you! Have great holidays!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for our wonderful and fun classes together. I am glad because it\'s not yet the end but just the start of more classes together. See you after a week. Have a great vacation. ^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct. I enjoyed the last class of this term today. >> I enjoyed the last class for this term. Let\'s start our class in the next term more interesting after around one week rest. >> Lets start another interesting class after next week\'s rest.How would the world be different if all the money in the world was shared out equally among all people?If all the money in the world was shared out equally among all people, it could be cause a huge confusion. >> If all the money in the world was shared out equally among all people, it could create a huge confusion.   Look at this situation of Europeon Union\'s currency problems these day. >> Look at the situation of Europeon Union\'s currency problems these day. Every each countries have their own economic levels. >> Every country has its own economic levels. So I think that each countries use their own money. >> So I think that each country uses its own money. Thank you! >> Correct. Have great holidays! >> Have a great holiday!

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