2/12 homework

Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for devoting your time in doing your homework despite your busy schedule. ^ ^

You gave an amazing input fro this topic. Indeed! We must stop labeling beauty. Just because you are fat doesn\'t mean you can\'t be fashionable. Every person has their own beauty. They are not defined with the clothes they wear and even their physical appearances. We should know better than that! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I strongly agree with that accusation.

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Many women thought If I will suit in well, I have to be slim like a model.

>>Many women think that if they will dress up well, they have to be slim like a model. 
Many models are suffered from anorexia, and many people who want to be like them is suffered too.

>>Many models suffer from anorexia, and many people who want to be like them suffer too. 
Generalization about the appearance is very dangerous.

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People away from the standard suffer from society\'s accusation.

>>People who stay away from what is standard suffer form the society\'s accusation. 
But, there are so many people in the world, and it means there are so many kinds of beauty.

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We can not make a standard about beauty.

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So, nowadays, we can find plus-model (I think maybe it means a plus-size model).

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They are not thin, and some women are obese.

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I think it\'s the right way.

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We should admit the various beauty and remove the prejudice from the appearance in our mind.

>>We should admit that beauty has its\' variations and remove the prejudice of appearance in our minds.