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학생이 쓴 원문
Mask is the best preventitive vaccination.
The mask ‘kf’ is made by crieation made in food and drug of ministry.
The more number, the better effective.
KF 80 mask is enough for general people.
If you don’t have kf mask, dental mask used by hosptial people is enough.
Pendemic is affected by 3 facotrs virus, host, and envrionment.
Human don’t have immunity yet, so people are vunerable to chorona virus.
If you doubt you are positive, it is important to be slf isolate by yourself.
After that you might call 1339 and hospital.
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Hello [이름]!
Thanks for sending a well-thought-out composition. See you tomorrow in class! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>Mask is the best preventive measure.
The mask ‘kf’ is made by crieation made in food and drug of ministry.
The mask ‘kf’ is made by crieation made in food and drug of ministry.
>>The \"KF\" mask was a creation made by the Food and Drug Ministry.
The more number, the better effective.
The more number, the better effective.
>>The higher the number, the more effective it is.
KF 80 mask is enough for general people.
KF 80 mask is enough for general people.
>>The KF 80 mask is enough for general use.
If you don’t have kf mask, dental mask used by hosptial people is enough.
If you don’t have kf mask, dental mask used by hosptial people is enough.
>>If you don’t have a KF mask, a dental mask used by the hospital staff is enough.
Pendemic is affected by 3 facotrs virus, host, and envrionment.
Pendemic is affected by 3 facotrs virus, host, and envrionment.
>>The Pandemic is influenced by 3 factors, the virus, the host, and the environment.
Human don’t have immunity yet, so people are vunerable to chorona virus.
Human don’t have immunity yet, so people are vunerable to chorona virus.
>>Humans don’t have the immunity yet, so people are vulnerable to the coronavirus.
If you doubt you are positive, it is important to be slf isolate by yourself.
If you doubt you are positive, it is important to be slf isolate by yourself.
>>If you suspect that you are positive, it is important to be self-isolate.
After that you might call 1339 and hospital.
After that you might call 1339 and hospital.
>>After that you may call 1339 and the hospital.
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