2-12th Homework

2016-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

All of problems has a reasonable solution. Of course, there would be a problem not having a solution. However, a lot of problems have a proper solution to solve it. And we usually use the solution already known to clear the problem. Although the solution already known is available, someone want to find out more effective things. By this action, human society has been developing. To more develop or go forth, we need more curiosity. But we have to think about the effectiveness when we work. When the schedule of the workloads is very early, if we already know the solution about its, the use of the solution is very proper. In this case, finding out another solution is very useless, I think. When we challenge new things, we firstly use the traditional solution. If it is not solved, we would find out another. Of course, another solution is not easy to be found out. We could not find until the schedule ended or though we found it may be not useful. Don't ignore the traditional solution.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! ^^ Thank you for answering our homework for today. I love reading about your thoughts and opinions. In addition to that, I would like to commend you for your writing. I honestly think your writing and sentence construction are improving a lot. Good job! In my opinion, traditional and modern solutions are equally important. I said this because traditional solutions are already tried and tested while modern solutions prove that we are curious individuals who constantly challenge our ideas and look for better answers. I agree with you when you said traditional solutions should not be ignored. Before we start looking for new answers and solutions, we should first utilize the ones that we have. However, we have to admit that there are times when traditional solutions become obsolete and unhelpful which warrants us to look for new solutions. This is the beauty of it all. Because we are thinking individuals, it is in our nature to look for better answers. I guess that\'s why the human race in itself has evolved that much. Great transitions has occurred throughout centuries because we constantly yearn to look for new answers/solutions to the existing problems that we have. Anyhow, this is my point-of-view regarding this matter. See you again on Tuesday. Good day and God bless. ^^ ~Teacher C[이름] All of problems has a reasonable solution. >> All problems have a reasonable solution. Of course, there would be a problem not having a solution. >> Of course, there would be a problem that does not have a solution. However, a lot of problems have a proper solution to solve it. >> However, a lot of problems have a proper solution that would solve it. And we usually use the solution already known to clear the problem. >> CORRECT! OR >> We usually use solutions that are already known to clear the problem. Although the solution already known is available, someone want to find out more effective things. >> Although the solution already known is available, some people still want to find out more effective solutions. OR >> Although the solution is already there, some people still look for more effective solutions. By this action, human society has been developing. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Through this action/process, the human society continuously develops. To more develop or go forth, we need more curiosity. >> To develop more or go forth, we need more curiosity. But we have to think about the effectiveness when we work. >> CORRECT! OR >> But we also have to think about the effectiveness when we are working. When the schedule of the workloads is very early, if we already know the solution about its, the use of the solution is very proper. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: When the schedule of the workloads is very early, it is best if we use the solution already known to us. The use of it is very proper. In this case, finding out another solution is very useless, I think. >> CORRECT! OR >> In my opinion, finding another solution for this case is not helpful. When we challenge new things, we firstly use the traditional solution. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Before we challenge the traditional solutions, we should first use them. If it is not solved, we would find out another. >> If the problem is not solved, then we should look for another solution. Of course, another solution is not easy to be found out. >> CORRECT! OR >> Of course, it is not easy to find another solution. We could not find until the schedule ended or though we found it may be not useful. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: There\'s a possibility that we could not find an alternative solution until the deadline and even if we find one, it may not be very useful/effective. Don\'t ignore the traditional solution. >> CORRECT! OR >> We should not ignore traditional solutions.

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