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2019-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[What recommendations would you make to somebody who has to give a presentation in English?] Wow, I think the most important thing is repeated practice before the real presentation. Even if I make a script and memorize that, it\'s difficult to speak equally with that. My head becomes complicated, and I just speak improvisationally. However, if I repeated many times, I can speak a similar sentence with a script. And my way to do an English presentation well is put the key sentence or point in the presentation slides. If so, I don\'t skip the important point, even if I make a mistake, the audience can understand what I want to do. Although many sentences in the presentation slides make the audience boring, one or two key sentences with main figures help the understanding. Especially, in my case, I have so many research presentation. This way is good to inform my research and their key results and discussion.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Wonderful afternoon to you! ^ ^ Thank you for accomplishing your homework. ^ ^ I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^

Thanks for this input. You are right on point. Before doing a presentation of course, one must be well prepared. And that is; understanding your presentation well. And, like what you have said; it\'s also best to remember the lines well by preparing a script and memorizing them by heart! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah



Wow, I think the most important thing is repeated practice before the real presentation.

>>Correct
Even if I make a script and memorize that, it\'s difficult to speak equally with that.

>>Even if I make a script and have memorized it, it would still be difficult to say the same things as what you have written and memorized. 
My head becomes complicated, and I just speak improvisationally.

>>My head becomes complicated and confused and I would just improvise or make things up.
However, if I repeated many times, I can speak a similar sentence with a script.

>>However, if I repeat the lines many times, I can say the script the way it is.
And my way to do an English presentation well is put the key sentence or point in the presentation slides.

>>And my way to do an English presentation well is to put the key sentence/s or the key point/s in the presentation slides. 
If so, I don\'t skip the important point, even if I make a mistake, the audience can understand what I want to do.

>>Doing so allows me to give the important points and even if I make mistakes, the audience can still understand what I\'m trying to say.
Although many sentences in the presentation slides make the audience boring, one or two key sentences with main figures help the understanding.

>>Although many sentences in the presentation slides make the audience feel bored, one or two key sentences with main figures help in the understanding. 
Especially, in my case, I have so many research presentation.

>>Correct
This way is good to inform my research and their key results and discussion.

>>It\'s a good way for me to give information and discuss the key results of my research.  

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