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2023-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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Do you prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing or active ones? I prefer doing something actively ok weekends to just staying on the bed. For instance, i enjoy going hot places such as popular restaurant, new bar, etc with friends.

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Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Do you prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing or active ones?

I prefer doing something actively ok weekends to just staying on the bed.

>> I prefer doing something active on weekends rather than just staying in bed.

For instance, i enjoy going hot places such as popular restaurant, new bar, etc with friends.

>> For instance, I enjoy going to hot places such as popular restaurants, new bars, etc. with my friends.

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