2-13th Homework

2016-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

We have to work to complete the project or jobs. If the workload is a little, I could do only myself. In many cases, the workloads are a lot and we have to co-work to do some things. When we start the work, firstly we set up a schedule and decide how to do it and what to do and who do it. In this case, there are usually a main and a sub-worker. The main worker have to charge the whole job, and the sub-worker also have to charge but his main job is supporting the main worker. Although the sub-worker is not main, he is also the main worker's colleague. Therefore, if the project is to be success, they have to cooperate. I think the inspiration is needed to all. Even if the project is not enormous, it is the project. Therefore, there are many things to cooperate with each other. And that time, the inspiration is good for us to work along. Previously described in the homework sentences, I could not be two people. If you want to do some things, you have to use another's help.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! ^^ Thank you again for promptly doing your homework. I enjoyed reading your opinions about our topic for today. I agree with you when you said inspiration does something great to people who are aiming for success not only for themselves but for their entire team. It\'s relatively easy to work on your own but if you want to accomplish great things, you would need other people to work with and see the same vision that you have. That is the essence of teamwork and inspiration actually plays a great role in it. There is strength when working in groups and I have proven that many times. I would like to share Andrew Carnegie\'s quote to you and it goes this way: \"No man will make a great leader who wants to do it all himself, or to get all the credit for doing it.\" It means in order to succeed, you have to delegate tasks and allow others to contribute to the job/task at hand. Your role as a leader is to inspire them and make sure that they are fully inspired to finish the job and achieve the goal you have set. You cannot push anyone up a ladder unless you are willing to climb a little yourself. Anyhow, I hope you are having a great day. I\'ll see you again next week. Good luck and enjoy your business trip. Take care always. ~Teacher C[이름] ^^ We have to work to complete the project or jobs. >> CORRECT! OR >> We have to work to complete the project or jobs given to us. If the workload is a little, I could do only myself. >> If the workload is little/small, I could do it all by myself. OR >> If the workload is little/small, I could do it on my own. In many cases, the workloads are a lot and we have to co-work to do some things. >> In many cases, the workloads are a lot and we have to work with others to finish some things. When we start the work, firstly we set up a schedule and decide how to do it and what to do and who do it. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: When we start the work, we first set up a schedule and decide what to do, how to do it and who should do it. In this case, there are usually a main and a sub-worker. >> CORRECT! OR >> In this instance, there are usually main workers and backup workers. The main worker have to charge the whole job, and the sub-worker also have to charge but his main job is supporting the main worker. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: The main worker is in-charge of the whole job, and the sub-worker, although he is also in-charge, has the main job of supporting the main worker. Although the sub-worker is not main, he is also the main worker\'s colleague. >> Although the sub-worker is not the main worker, he is also the main worker\'s colleague. Therefore, if the project is to be success, they have to cooperate. >> Therefore, for the project is to become a success, they have to cooperate with each other. I think the inspiration is needed to all. >> CORRECT! OR >> I think the inspiration is important to everybody. Even if the project is not enormous, it is the project. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Even if the project is not enormous, it is still important. Therefore, there are many things to cooperate with each other. >> Therefore, there are many things that we have to cooperate with each other. And that time, the inspiration is good for us to work along. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: And at that time, inspiration is good for us to work well and get along with each other. Previously described in the homework sentences, I could not be two people. >> As previously described in the homework, I could not be two people. If you want to do some things, you have to use another\'s help. >> CORRECT! OR >> If you want to do some things, you have to use another person\'s help.

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