2/14 HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Pro= They can earn a lot of money.
Con= After their popularity, they can\'t earn any money.
강사 첨삭
I couldn\'t agree more, Zoe. This is certainly the case for celebrities who did not pursue further studies by skipping university. It may seem fun at first to not study anymore and simply earn a lot of cash, but its long-term effect will definitely be regrettable.
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
Con= After their popularity, they can\'t earn any money.
Con= After their popularity, they can\'t earn any money.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> It will be difficult for them to earn money.
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