2. 14 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Parents can be the best teachers for their kids. Good parents who have a very good relationship each other and love their children can be good example of life for their children. On the contrary, Bad parents who don\'t care of their children and have bad nature can teach \"living like them is a tradegy.\" to their children. In both way, parents can be the best teachers for their kids.
Parents can be the best teachers for their kids. Good parents who develop deep relationship with their children can be one of the good examples. On the contrary, some parents who do not care of their children and develop negative environment can imply \"living like them is a tragedy\" to their children. In both ways, parents can be the best teachers.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.