2/14 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Yena,
Thank you for writing an essay.
I know that you are really eager to learn new things in English.
Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need.
You can do it, if others can, so can you.
T. Jeny
Composition: What can you understand from this proverb? Explain briefly.
\"Easy come, easy go.\"
>>correct
Easy come, easy go as proverb means that To get a thing which i want, people should make an enough effort and work hard.
>>Easy come, easy go as proverb means that to get a thing which you want, people should make an effort and work hard.
if not we can\'t get what we want.>>if not we can\'t get what we want.
Jenny, I\'m sorry for late my homework.
>>Jenny, I\'m sorry for my late homework.
During the holiday,I watched movie in theater and ate delicious foods.
>>During the holidays, I watched a movie in the theater and ate delicious food.
That was enough rest. I am full of energy.
>>That was enough rest. I am full of energy.
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