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2019-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[What do you think the world will be like in 100 years?] Um... it\'s difficult to imagine because maybe I will be not here at that time. Anyway, I think human will find a new earth on another planet. Already the powers of the world are finding and developing the space. I regard to be a new type of world war. Because a rich country can invest money in the space industry. But, a poor country can not do that. So, even if they will find a new planet which human can survive, it will be not to the people in a poor country. Surely high-technology will be growing up continuously. Sometimes we thought \'I hope I will be two persons if so, I can enjoy and another me will work forever\'. It would be a reality. I don\'t know it will be how much affected human. But, human will adapt and survive in any environment changing.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework and sending it on time! ^ ^  Thank you for your thoughts too! ^ ^

I agree with you, it\'s sort of hard to imagine what life would be like in the future or a hundred years from now. Maybe Earth or us humans no longer exist. Maybe Earth will have a different name and humans are no longer called humans. Or we may evolved into something different and we may abandon Earth and the next time we visit, Earth will be inhabited by other kinds of species lesser or more superior than us!  ^^

-Teacher Jedah 


Um... it\'s difficult to imagine because maybe I will be not here at that time.

>>Um... it\'s difficult to imagine because most likely I will no longer be around at that time. 
Anyway, I think human will find a new earth on another planet.

>>Anyway, I think humans will find a new earth on another planet.

>>Anyway, I think humans will find a new planet to inhabit.
Already the powers of the world are finding and developing the space. 

>>It is evident these days that the resources of the world is being used in finding and discovering more about space.
I regard to be a new type of world war.

>>I regard it as a new type of world war.
Because a rich country can invest money in the space industry. 

>>Correct
But, a poor country can not do that. 

>>Correct

So, even if they will find a new planet which human can survive, it will be not to the people in a poor country.

>>So, even if they will find a new planet with which humans can survive, it will not be for the poor people.
Surely high-technology will be growing up continuously. 

>>Surely high-technology will be growing continuously. 
Sometimes we thought \'I hope I will be two persons if so, I can enjoy and another me will work forever\'. 

>>Sometimes I imagine that I could be two instead of just being one person so I can enjoy life and the other me will work forever.
It would be a reality.

>>Maybe it would be a reality in the future or a hundred years from now.
I don\'t know it will be how much affected human. 

>>I am not sure how much it will affect humanity.
But, human will adapt and survive in any environment changing.

>>But humans will adapt and survive in any changing environment.

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