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Hi, Verna, I forgot that you have another part time job. Do you teach English privately, don’t you? I know many Korean people go to Philippine to study English. Most of them were university students before, but it isn’t now. I heard that many elementary students visit in there during their vacation. And they experience your culture in English with teacher. But I’m not sure how it is efficient to study English. I know that learning language at the tender age is more better than at old age. But most parents have to gain a lot of money to send their children to countries using English. Even some father live far apart their family. They have to send much money to their children and wife living in countries using English When I see this situation, it seems that our father is machine making money. And they forget the true happiness for our life after all.

Hello [이름]! Thank you for making this composition and letting me know about your thoughts on children who are sent away to different places to study English. I\'ve made a some changes so please review them. Take care! Teacher Verna Hi, Verna, >> Hi Verna.I forgot that you have another part time job. >> Correct!Do you teach English privately, don’t you? >> You also teach English privately, don\'t you?I know many Korean people go to Philippine to study English. >> I know that many Koreans go to the Philippines to study English. >> I know that many people from Korea go to the Philippines to study English.Most of them were university students before, but it isn’t now. >> Most of them were university students before, but aren\'t now.I heard that many elementary students visit in there during their vacation. >> I also heard that many elementary students visit there during their vacation.And they experience your culture in English with teacher. >> And they experience the culture of studying English with a teacher.But I’m not sure how it is efficient to study English. >> But I\'m not sure how efficient they will become after studying English.I know that learning language at the tender age is more better than at old age. >> I know that learning a language at a tender age is better than learning at an old age.But most parents have to gain a lot of money to send their children to countries using English. >> But most parents need to have a lot of money so they can send their children to English speaking countries. >> But most parents need to have a lot of money so they can send their children to countries that learn to speak English.Even some father live far apart their family. >> A father may have to live far from his family.They have to send much money to their children and wife living in countries using English >> They have to send much money to their children and their wife who are living in English speaking countries.When I see this situation, it seems that our father is machine making money. >> When I see such situation, it seems to me that the father is turning out to be money making machine.And they forget the true happiness for our life after all. >> And these families forget what is true happiness in life, after all.