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When I visit hospital, I\'m worried about some disease and nervous.
So I try to stay good condition.
For example I exercise three or four a week.
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Hi there, [이름] [이름]!
I don\'t like visiting hospitals too. It\'s uncomfortable and I usually have to wait in line for hours. I only see a doctor when my condition is unbearable.
- Kristine ^^
When I visit hospital, I\'m worried about some disease and nervous.
>> I feel nervous when I visit the hospital. I\'m also worried about some diseases.
So I try to stay good condition.
So I try to stay good condition.
>> So, I try to stay healthy.
For example I exercise three or four a week.
For example I exercise three or four a week.
>> For example, I exercise three or four times a week.
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