2-15th Homework

2016-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

I think also a little knowledge is a dangerous thing to all of us. It is like to fumble a leg of an elephant. We need a lot of knowledge correctly to do some things. For example, supposed to make a boat with a lot of materials. If I only know the various shape of the boat and I don't know about a method of making it, it would be serious. When we make some things, we have to know about all of things. Even if we can make the boat, it could not float and finally fail into water. We need many things to launch the boat, for example, the materials, the mathematics and the knowhow. As like this, to make or to establish some things is not easy. However, in some cases someone intends to know all things. It is a shortcut to fall into a fail. We just have to aggregate our knowledge. And then, we can learn more things through this processing, we can also support my colleagues. To increase our knowledge, we have to get an attitude that is to learn about things from others. If then, it will be ok.

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Hi, [이름]! ^^ Thank you for promptly doing your homework for today. I also agree with the opinion that little knowledge is dangerous. On the other hand, I also believe that pretending or assuming that you know everything is equally dangerous. The first one is dangerous because the situation is similar to a blind man who is also guiding another blind man. They both end up falling into a cliff because they\'re both blind. They both lack knowledge. Knowledge could serve as our eyes. With enough knowledge we are able to carry out the things that we need to do correctly and achieve our desired goal/objective. The second situation is not so different from the first one. Only this time, the person pretends to know what to do. It\'s just like a person who says that he knows how to drive a plane and ends up crashing it and killing the people inside including himself. It\'s also good not to know everything because your curiosity is being roused which prompts you to ask questions, think and look for answers. Anyhow, I had a good time reading about your opinions. Keep it up! ^^ I hope your day is going well. See you again tomorrow. Take care and God bless. ~Teacher C[이름] (^_^) I think also a little knowledge is a dangerous thing to all of us. >> I also think a little knowledge is a dangerous thing to all of us. It is like to fumble a leg of an elephant. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: It is just like fumbling a leg of an elephant. We need a lot of knowledge correctly to do some things. >> We need a lot of correct knowledge to do some things. For example, supposed to make a boat with a lot of materials. >> For example, when we make a boat we need a lot of materials. If I only know the various shape of the boat and I don\'t know about a method of making it, it would be serious. >> If I only know the various shapes of the boat and I don\'t know about the method of making it, it would be a serious problem. When we make some things, we have to know about all of things. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: When we make some things, we have to be knowledgeable about it. Even if we can make the boat, it could not float and finally fail into water. >> Even if we can make the boat, it could not float and finally sink into the water. We need many things to launch the boat, for example, the materials, the mathematics and the knowhow. >> We need to know a lot of things to launch the boat, for example, the materials, the mathematics and the know-how. As like this, to make or to establish some things is not easy. >> CORRECT! OR >> Just like in this situation, to make or to establish some things is not easy. However, in some cases someone intends to know all things. >> CORRECT! OR >> However, in some instances someone intends to know everything. It is a shortcut to fall into a fail. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: It is a shortcut towards failure. We just have to aggregate our knowledge. >> CORRECT! OR >> We just have to bring everything that we know together. And then, we can learn more things through this processing, we can also support my colleagues. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Through this process, we can learn more things and also support our colleagues. To increase our knowledge, we have to get an attitude that is to learn about things from others. >> To increase our knowledge, we have to have an attitude of learning about things from others. If then, it will be ok. >> If we do that, it will be okay.

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