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2012-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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I agree that language skill is most have item for Korean living competitive society. But i think that it is not first priority for our life value. How about your opinion? When you teach English to Korean, what kinds of thoughts do you have? And do you think learning English in Philippine is effective? And do you thinklearning English by phone is efficient? I’m very pleased to talk with you in English every day, but i sometimes realize that my English is not developed in portion to my time. And i feel that it is so expensive. In my case, my company supports a lot of portion to enroll English academy. So it is not too heavy a burden to study for me, but other people think that study English by phone is not cheap. Could you let me know how can i study English with cheap cost? ^^

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Hello [이름]! You made a good composition about what you thought were the consequences of studying English through the phone or in the Philippines. Again, review your writing with the changes that I\'ve made. Teacher Verna I agree that language skill is most have item for Korean living competitive society. >> I agree that a good language skill is a must have for Koreans living in our competitive society.But i think that it is not first priority for our life value. >> But I think that it is not a top priority compared to other life values.How about your opinion? >> Correct!When you teach English to Korean, what kinds of thoughts do you have? >> When you teach English to Koreans, what kind of thoughts do you have?And do you think learning English in Philippine is effective? >> And do you think that learning English in the Philippine is effective?And do you thinklearning English by phone is efficient? >> Do you also think that learning English by phone is efficient? I’m very pleased to talk with you in English every day, but i sometimes realize that my English is not developed in portion to my time. >> I\'m very pleased to talk with you in English every day, but sometimes I realize that my English is not developed in proportion to the time I\'m spending talking English with you.And i feel that it is so expensive. >> And I feel that it is so expensive.In my case, my company supports a lot of portion to enroll English academy. >> In my case, my company has a portion of support for us to enrol in an English academy. So it is not too heavy a burden to study for me, but other people think that study English by phone is not cheap. >> So it is not too much of a burden for me, but other people think that studying English by phone is not cheap. >> So it is not a heavy burden for me to study, but other people think that studying English by phone is expensive.Could you let me know how can i study English with cheap cost? ^^ >> Could you let me know how do I or how could I study English with a cheap cost?

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