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학생이 쓴 원문
I think different cultures see less externalities beauty than our country.
I think plastic surgery is free but dangerous. The most common plastic surgery in Korea is double eyelid surgery.
I suddenly had an appointment today, so I stopped class and started again.🥲
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing. I think everyone has a different definition of beauty. Whatever it is, everyone is beautiful in their own specials ways, right? Have a good day!^^
I suddenly had an appointment today, so I stopped class and started again.🥲
~Elica~
I think different cultures see less externalities beauty than our country.
>>I think different cultures see less external beauty than out country.
I think plastic surgery is free but dangerous.
I think plastic surgery is free but dangerous.
>>CORRECT
The most common plastic surgery in Korea is double eyelid surgery.
>>CORRECT
I suddenly had an appointment today, so I stopped class and started again.🥲
>>I suddenly had an appointment today, so I postponed the class and resumed it.
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