2-17 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Verna,
I’m in office now even though most people at my office go home.
As i told you, i have to be completed many kinds of task.
And after finishing work, there are a lot of house chores for me at home.
I didn’t know that doing chores such as washing and cleansing is too difficult before
At that time, most things such that was my mother’s responsibilities.
After marriage, all kinds of work are mine.
Even though my husband does that together, but he is poor at doing house chores.
And i usually arrive early at home compared to my husband in most weekday.
So i have to prepare some food for our dinner.
And i think that eating outside is not good our health, because that kinds of food can be contained much sugar and salt.
So i try to eat dinner together at home instead of eating outside.
But it takes a long time to do, and it is not convenient.
And i envy your situation, i think that eating dinner made by husband is not common. ^^
You are a lucky woman.
강사 첨삭
Hi! How are you? I hope you had a great day! Wow! You\'re amazing!You see to it taht your responsibilities are done properly. It is true that we need to do a lot fo things at work and afterwards there are lots of tasks yet to do at home. Just relax doing those household chores and you can also play music so that you will not get tired easily. ^_^ Great job! Thank you for sending me your composition. Take Care Always! Have a great night!
T. Verna
Hi, Verna,
>>CorrectI’m in office now even though most people at my office go home.
>>Im in the office right now, most of the people here on the office went home.As i told you, i have to be completed many kinds of task.
>>As I\'ve said, I have to complete lots of tasks,And after finishing work, there are a lot of house chores for me at home.
>>And after work, there are lot of household chores that I need to accomplish at home.I didn’t know that doing chores such as washing and cleansing is too difficult before
>>I didn\'t know that doing household chores such as washing and cleaning is too difficult.At that time, most things such that was my mother’s responsibilities.
>>Before, that was my mother\'s responsibilities.After marriage, all kinds of work are mine.
>>After I got married, I should o those kinds of work.Even though my husband does that together, but he is poor at doing house chores.
>>My husband also helps me doing chores but he is not that good with it.And i usually arrive early at home compared to my husband in most weekday.
>>I usually arrive earlier than my husband in weekdays.So i have to prepare some food for our dinner.
>>So I have to prepare for our dinner.And i think that eating outside is not good our health, because that kinds of food can be contained much sugar and salt.
>>And I think eating outside is not good for our health because some foods contain a lot of salt and sugar.So i try to eat dinner together at home instead of eating outside.
>>We usually eat dinner together at home instead of eating outside.But it takes a long time to do, and it is not convenient.
>>But it takes a long time to prepare, and it is not that convenient.And i envy your situation, i think that eating dinner made by husband is not common. ^^
>>I envy your situation because it is not common to eat dinner which is prepared by a husband.You are a lucky woman.
>>Correct
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