2-17th Homework

The criticism don't make us being happy. Sometimes, it makes me nervous or it makes me irritate. But it is not often, we have to take the criticism from others. Anyway, if we listen to the criticism, absolutely we could not be happy. When one said to you, you want to listen good words inwardly. If your hopes are cracked, you would be very stressful. It is very common phenomenon for us like a normal person. If you don't feel it, I think you are a sage or a fool. When we grew up, we always got the criticism from parents or sister or brother. But we didn't get stressful, we just accepted it. After we became an adult, we could not being patient about other's criticism. In our mind, we may have the thought that we have to protect other's attack and we must do the counterattack. Also, if we don't do something like a counterattack, we would not get the self-confidence ourselves. I think the balance is very important. The criticism is not always right but it is not always bad.

Hello there [이름]! ^^ Thank you very much for doing your homework. :) I had a great time reading your opinions. Being criticized is never pleasant for anyone but it could actually make you a better person and open new opportunities for you. You\'re right when you said, not all criticisms are correct and not all of them are bad. I think it\'s just a matter of looking at the kind of criticism thrown at you. If it is given to you to make your work better or to make you a better person then it is the good kind of criticism. If it is given to you to destroy you and make you feel weak and pitiful, then it is the bad kind of criticism. Once you have identified the kind of criticism you get, then decide what reaction you should give. Most people get angry right away and let their emotion control them, which is wrong. In most cases, you should think first before reacting because uncontrolled emotions are dangerous. Anyhow, this is my opinion regarding this matter. I hope you\'re having a great day. See you on Thursday. ~Teacher C[이름] :) The criticism don\'t make us being happy. >> Criticisms don\'t make us happy. Sometimes, it makes me nervous or it makes me irritate. >> Sometimes, it makes me nervous or it makes me irritated. OR >> Sometimes, it makes me nervous or it irritates me. But it is not often, we have to take the criticism from others. >> But it is not often. We have to take the criticism from others. OR >> But it is not often and we have to take criticisms from others. Anyway, if we listen to the criticism, absolutely we could not be happy. >> Anyway, if we listen to the criticism absolutely, we could not be happy. OR >> Anyway, if we only listen to criticisms, we could not be happy. When one said to you, you want to listen good words inwardly. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: When someone criticizes you, you want to look at it positively. If your hopes are cracked, you would be very stressful. >> If your hopes are cracked, you would be very stressed. It is very common phenomenon for us like a normal person. >> It is a very common phenomenon for us normal persons. OR >> It is a very common phenomenon for us normal people. If you don\'t feel it, I think you are a sage or a fool. >> CORRECT! OR >> If you don\'t feel it, then you are either a sage or a fool. When we grew up, we always got the criticism from parents or sister or brother. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: When we are already a grown up, we always get criticisms from our parents, sister or brother. But we didn\'t get stressful, we just accepted it. >> But we didn\'t get stressed about it. We just accepted it. After we became an adult, we could not being patient about other\'s criticism. >> After we become an adule, we become impatient with others\' criticisms. In our mind, we may have the thought that we have to protect other\'s attack and we must do the counterattack. >> In our minds, we may have thought of protecting ourselves from other people\'s attacks and do a counterattack. Also, if we don\'t do something like a counterattack, we would not get the self-confidence ourselves. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Also, if we don\'t do a counterattack, we would not get our self-confidence back. I think the balance is very important. >> I think balance is very important. The criticism is not always right but it is not always bad. >> CORRECT! OR >> Criticisms are not always right but they\'re not always bad.