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I have ever stopped eating wheat flavor during about 1 year. At that time also, I wanted to loose weight, but it was not successful. Nevertheless, I satisfy to endure for 1 year. Not eating wheat flavor made me more light and fresh.
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Hi, Kelly! That\'s impressive! Staying away from wheat for a year takes a lot of dedication. Keep going on your journey to feeling light and fresh!
~T. Jenna
I have ever stopped eating wheat flavor during about 1 year.
>>I stopped eating wheat-based foods for about a year.
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>>I eliminated wheat from my diet for nearly a year.
At that time also, I wanted to loose weight, but it was not successful.
>>At that time, I also wanted to lose weight, but I was not successful.
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>>During that period, I also aspired to lose weight, but my efforts were unsuccessful.
Nevertheless, I satisfy to endure for 1 year.
>>Nevertheless, I am satisfied that I endured for a year.
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>>Nevertheless, I take pride in maintaining my commitment for a year.
Not eating wheat flavor made me more light and fresh.
>>Not eating wheat made me feel lighter and fresher.
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>>Cutting out wheat made me feel lighter and more refreshed.
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