2/19 homework

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T. Jeny     

Describe an experience where you were unsuccessful in achieving your goal. What lessons did you learn from this experience?

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I have a bachelor\'s degree and major in visual communication design.

>>I was taking Bachelor\'s degree in Visual Communication Design.
 But I changed my course. 

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 Now I major in Elementary Education.

>>Now, my major is Elementary Education.

>>Now,  I am majoring in Elementary Education.
 In order to change my course, I would have had a College Scholastic Ability Test. 

>> In order for me to change my course, I have to have a College Scholastic Ability Test. 
This test is so difficult. 

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 Thus, When I started study again, my mock examination score is terrible. 

>> Thus, when I started study again, my mock examination score was terrible. 
 But I really tried hard. Finally I have done. 

>>But I really tried hard so finally, I made it.
 Now, I am student in Elementary Education university.

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