2. 19 Homework

2018-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: ** WRITING TASK ** “The only constant thing is change.” Do you agree with this statement? I agree with the opinion that everything is changed. Not only the environment is being changed every day but also people are chaning all the time. People try not to lose their first intention but it's impossible for them to live like the first day. They are changed to the good or bad way. I always wondered one woman and one man can love each other for their entire life. Now, I believe if two people always try to think the importance of the relationship, they can last for long time as a mate.

강사 첨삭

I agree with the opinion that everything is changed. Not only the environment is being changed every day but also people are chaning all the time. People try not to lose their first intention but it\'s impossible for them to live like the first day. They are changed to the good or bad way. I always wondered one woman and one man can love each other for their entire life. Now, I believe if two people always try to think the importance of the relationship, they can last for long time as a mate.


I agree with the given statement that everything can change. Not only environment but even people can also change constantly. People try not to lose their first intentions or plans but it is quite impossible for them to live the way they lived before. They could change either in a good or bad ways. I always wonder if a man and woman can love each other through out their entire lives, but now I believe that if two people always try to think the importance of their relationship, they can last for a long time as a mate.

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