2/19 homework
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[About the best memory you have with your best friend]
We have big test system to enter the university in end of high school season in Korea.
>>> We have a big college entrance exam in in South Korea.
After finish the test, we have short free time before announce the score.
>>> After the exam, senior high school students have a short break before the result comes out.
So, I went to an amusement park with my best friend after the test.
>>> In my case, after finishing the test, I went to an amusement park with my best friend.
At that time, I felt that my stress during my school years was gone.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: At that time, I felt the stress accumulated during my school years was all gone.
We took so many rides and had nice food in there.
>>> Correct!
The amusement park was like children\'s book.
>>> The amusement park was like that in the children\'s book.
We really enjoyed a lot.
>>> Correct!
Sometimes, when I have strong stress nowadays, I think the day and me in there.
>>> Sometimes, when I am severely stress nowadays, I think of the memory I had with my friend.
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