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Hi there,

  Some of my fondest memories are of traveling with my family when I was a child, especially family road trips. In retrospect, I have to wonder if it was fun for my parents! After all, they had to cope with traveling with my brother and me without all the cool tricks and technology we have now, like DVD players and hand-held game systems. I'm grateful to these gadgets for making travel easier; after all, traveling with four boys under age eight is incredibly challenging on all fronts. But we've found a way to make it work! I hope we can travel to Korea in the future.

~Teacher Verna~

My extensive experience will help me as a cabin crew deal with the many different types of passengers I will serve at QR Air.3.

>> My extensive experience as a cabin crew will help me deal with the many different types of passengers I will serve at QR Air.3.

Well, I would like to live with friend as a flat mate from unfamiliar country to me.

>> Well, I would like to live with friend as a flat mate from an unfamiliar country to me.

For example when I stayed Syria as an exchange student I met a lot of Italian, Spanish, French friends. 

>> For example when I stayed in Syria as an exchange student I met a lot of Italians, Spanish,  and French friends. 

So If I could, I would like to c[이름]se to live another, unfamiliar national friends such as Germany, UK, HK.

>> So If I could, I would like to c[이름]se to live in another, unfamiliar national friends such as Germany, UK, and HK.

For a similar reason, I wouldn’t like to live with Egypt or Jordan.

>> For a similar reason, I wouldn\'t like to live with an Egyptian or Jordain.

Because already I know about them such as culture, life style, religion and so on.

>>Correct

4.I would like to recommend Namsangol Traditional Korean Village to my foreign friends. 

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That place is so famous to see a traditional house and to experience an old style.

>> That place is so famous for traditional house and they can experience an old style way of living.

And we can see beautiful sights, and play traditional-old games with kindly explain.

>> And we can see beautiful sights, and play traditional-old games with kind explanation.

And second place is Gaarousu-gil. I think it’s one the world’s most beautiful avenues.

>>Correct

Garosu-gil means ‘tree-lined street’and foreign visitors will enjoy it.

>>Correct