2-19th Homework
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I think the inferiority or the self-worth would depend on our minds. We generally think about our ability when we are defeated in competitions. At that time, the way of thinking about that is the most important thing. When we fail to win in the competition among others, if you agree other's ability and your ability we would be a winner someday. And any inferiority won't place in your mind. Of course, the preparation for future also necessaries. It is also important to get the self-worth in your mind. I think the preparation makes the self-worth. If you want to overcome your inferiority, the preparation would be the main weapon to defeat your inferiority. I think there is another thing to overcome the inferiority and get the self-worth. Don't compare with others. At the moment you compare with others, you would be unhappy. Yeah, It is not easy way. But I think this is the best way to find your way. Everybody has a different ability and a circumstance, therefore, do your best. It's okay.
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The mind is a very powerful tool.
If you always think of negative thoughts, those thoughts eventually become your reality.
When you feel inferior and see yourself unworthy, you won\'t get anywhere.
That\'s how powerful the mind is.
I\'ve seen talented people suffer from a defeat and their talents got wasted.
For me, failure is not a destination.
I see it as a ladder.
If today you\'re not on top, for as long as you believe in yourself and see your self-worth, then one day you will be.
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I think the inferiority or the self-worth would depend on our minds.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I think inferiority or self-worth depends on a person.
We generally think about our ability when we are defeated in competitions.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We usually think about our abilities/capabilities when we are defeated in competitions.
At that time, the way of thinking about that is the most important thing.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: At that time, the way we think about ourselves is the most important thing.
When we fail to win in the competition among others, if you agree other\'s ability and your ability we would be a winner someday.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: When we fail to win in a competition but still appreciate other people\'s ability as well as our own ability, we would be a winner someday.
And any inferiority won\'t place in your mind.
>> And any inferiority won\'t have a place in your mind.
Of course, the preparation for future also necessaries.
>> Of course, the preparation for the future is also necessary.
It is also important to get the self-worth in your mind.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It is also important to see your own self-worth.
I think the preparation makes the self-worth.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: I think preparation increases self-worth.
If you want to overcome your inferiority, the preparation would be the main weapon to defeat your inferiority.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If you want to overcome feeling inferior, preparing well would be your main weapon to defeat it.
I think there is another thing to overcome the inferiority and get the self-worth.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: I think there is another thing that you have to do to overcome inferiority and gain self-worth.
Don\'t compare with others.
>> Don\'t compare yourself with others.
At the moment you compare with others, you would be unhappy.
>> If you compare yourself with others at the moment, you would be unhappy.
Yeah, It is not easy way.
>> Yeah, it is not an easy way.
But I think this is the best way to find your way.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> However, I think it\'s the best way when you\'re trying to find your way out.
Everybody has a different ability and a circumstance, therefore, do your best.
>> Everybody has a different ability and circumstance, therefore, do your best.
It\'s okay.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It\'s alright.
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