2-1st Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I was late for adding more free classes. I saw my check-up site today. Oh dear, there was nothing. I thought that I could reuse the previous classes. But that was my mistake. From this class, I will fully use the policy of the adding point in this site. I will open my composition from now. Deception never have good results. Deception is to pretend to be true as previously describing in the question. At the moment, deception could be true. However, it is not true. Finally, someone may find out that it is not true. In first, the good results could be. But it is not easy way to continuously maintain the situation. It's because the construction of deception is very weak to sustain itself in front of true. If a point of its breaks off abruptly, all of things would be destructed at the same time. Deception is always like walking on the thin ice plates. However, it is always an exception. If a power is related, to discover the true and to recovery a mistaken thing are very difficult.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! (^^,)
How\'s your Monday so far?
Thank you very much for writing in our composition board and sharing your thoughts and ideas.
Sometimes we have to say white lies in order to avoid hurting the feelings of other people, especially when we know that they\'re emotionally sensitive or may be going through difficult situations.
However, I also believe in the saying: \"The truth hurts but it would set you free\".
I honestly believe that, the truth serves as our eye opener.
It allows us to be conscious of our flaws or whatever it is that\'s lacking in us.
When you know the truth, you do your best to make the wrong things right.
Sometimes it\'s really difficult to be honest with other people, especially with the people we care about but.
I think that\'s the reason why some people deceive others.
They want to gain their approval or take advantage of the moment.
But for me, whatever the reason or the point is, it\'s still wrong to deceive others.
I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you again tomorrow. ^^
Take care always.
~Teacher C[이름] (^^,)
I was late for adding more free classes.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I was not able to beat the deadline for adding more free classes.
I saw my check-up site today.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I saw my page today.
Oh dear, there was nothing.
>> Oh, dear. There was nothing.
I thought that I could reuse the previous classes.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I thought I could reuse the previous classes.
But that was my mistake.
>> But, that was my mistake.
From this class, I will fully use the policy of the adding point in this site.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: Starting from this class, I will strictly follow the policy on the addition of points from this site.
I will open my composition from now.
>> I will always open my composition board from now on.
Deception never have good results.
>> Deception never has good results.
OR >> Deception never gives good results.
Deception is to pretend to be true as previously describing in the question.
>> Deception is to pretend to be true as previously described in the question.
At the moment, deception could be true.
>> At the moment, a deception could feel true.
However, it is not true.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> But, it is not true.
Finally, someone may find out that it is not true.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Finally, they might discover that it is not true.
In first, the good results could be.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: There could be good results at first.
But it is not easy way to continuously maintain the situation.
>> But it is not easy to continuously maintain the situation.
It\'s because the construction of deception is very weak to sustain itself in front of true.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: It\'s because a deception is often very weak to sustain itself in front of the truth.
If a point of its breaks off abruptly, all of things would be destructed at the same time.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: If it gets discovered, all of the other things would undergo destruction at the same time.
Deception is always like walking on the thin ice plates.
>> Deception is always like walking on thin ice plates.
However, it is always an exception.
>> However, there is always an exception.
If a power is related, to discover the true and to recovery a mistaken thing are very difficult.
>> If power is involved, discovering the truth and recovering from a mistaken are very difficult to do.
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