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2021-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Elica

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What is the first thing you notice about a person? I notice new clothes or new hair styles first. But I don\'t notice about the change of makeup well. What do the clothes someone wears say about that person? The clothes say their preference of color, pattern and activity. If someone likes to exercise, he wear a training clothes. When are the most important times to make a good first impression? The most important times are when you have a first conversation. Then, you should speak kindly.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for taking the time to answer these questions! Well done!
~Elica
What is the first thing you notice about a person?
>>CORRECT
I notice new clothes or new hair styles first. But I don\'t notice about the change of makeup well.
>>CORRECT

What do the clothes someone wears say about that person?
>>CORRECT
The clothes say their preference of color, pattern and activity.
>>CORRECT
If someone likes to exercise, he wear a training clothes.
>>CORRECT

When are the most important times to make a good first impression?
>>CORRECT
The most important times are when you have a first conversation. 
>>The most important time is when you have a first conversation. 
Then, you should speak kindly.
>>CORRECT

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