2.2 Homework

2015-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Kelly! Good morning! We have gotten another blessed new week thankfully. Good luck all the week to you! Is gardening a hobby for [이름] or old people? Generally spraking, gardening a hobby is for old people in Korea. Because [이름] people like dynamic activities in common. I am already an old man, so I am interested in gardening these days. I think that gardening a hobby helps us in gaining a good mental health. It makes me feel comfortable. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thanks for your homework. Please go over my corrections. Have a great day!~Kelly^^ Hi Kelly! Good morning! >> Correct! We have gotten another blessed new week thankfully. >> We have gotten another blessed new week. >> We should be thankful to have gotten another blessed new week. Good luck all the week to you!>> I wish you good luck this week!Is gardening a hobby for [이름] or old people?Generally spraking, gardening a hobby is for old people in Korea. >> Generally speaking, gardening is a hobby is for old people in Korea.   Because [이름] people like dynamic activities in common. >> Because [이름] people like dynamic activities. I am already an old man, so I am interested in gardening these days. >> Correct! I think that gardening a hobby helps us in gaining a good mental health. >> I think that gardening is a hobby that helps us in gaining a good mental health. It makes me feel comfortable. >> Correct!Thank you! >> Correct!

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