2.2 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kelly! Good morning! We have gotten another blessed new week thankfully. Good luck all the week to you!
Is gardening a hobby for [이름] or old people?
Generally spraking, gardening a hobby is for old people in Korea. Because [이름] people like dynamic activities in common. I am already an old man, so I am interested in gardening these days. I think that gardening a hobby helps us in gaining a good mental health. It makes me feel comfortable.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]!
Thanks for your homework. Please go over my corrections.
Have a great day!~Kelly^^
Hi Kelly! Good morning!
>> Correct!
We have gotten another blessed new week thankfully.
>> We have gotten another blessed new week.
>> We should be thankful to have gotten another blessed new week.
Good luck all the week to you!>> I wish you good luck this week!Is gardening a hobby for [이름] or old people?Generally spraking, gardening a hobby is for old people in Korea.
>> Generally speaking, gardening is a hobby is for old people in Korea.
Because [이름] people like dynamic activities in common. >> Because [이름] people like dynamic activities.
I am already an old man, so I am interested in gardening these days.
>> Correct!
I think that gardening a hobby helps us in gaining a good mental health.
>> I think that gardening is a hobby that helps us in gaining a good mental health.
It makes me feel comfortable.
>> Correct!Thank you!
>> Correct!
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