2. 2. Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
I don\'t think men who cry are weak. Instead, I think they have their emotions and they can show it outside. I heared that one of the reasons of that men\'s lifespan is shorter than women is men are forced not to cry from their society. I think crying means treatment by themselves instead of weakness. So I want to recommend to men that you must cry when you want to and it can make you recover from the adversity of life! Moreover, the thought that men\'s mental power is stonger than women\'s is prejudice.
I don\'t think men who cry are weak. Instead, I think they also have their emotions and they can show it to other people. I heard that one of the reasons why men\'s lifespan is shorter than women is because men are forced not to cry because of society. I believe crying is a treatment to themselves instead of weakness. So I would like to suggest that men must cry and must not be afraid to show their real emotions. Most importantly, it can make them recover from the adversity of life! Finally, the thought that men\'s mental and psychological capability is much stronger than women is a prejudice.
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